Thursday, May 20, 2010

Theirs. . .

It was her.  He picked the ringing fone softly flashing her name to her fav song.  Her voice melodious as always, tugged at the depth of his heart. He could hear the excitement - of a secret about to be shared - in her voice, as she invited him to their fav meeting spot to tell him about something important, "for a special surprise" as she put it.  His eyes were softening at the sound of her voice, but also had the pain they always bore, whenever he heard her.  He smiled, so she could hear it in his voice and said he'll be there, for after all, he had been expecting this call.  He went about his day of work, without any visible distraction, but a neat undercurrent of memories, wishes, hopes, disappointments, love, misery.

He was there, 15 mins ahead in time and stood at the shore and let the lapping waves soothe his tired body while his heart raced.  But he exuded calm and cool, as always.  He sensed her and turned, she walked to the spot beside him and stood enjoying the soothing waves and the beautiful scenery, emanating soft beauty, as always.  The beach was mostly deserted at this late twilight hour.  They walked to their fav bench, she entwined her hand through his elbow on the way and he responded with a reassuring smile.

As they sat at the bench, she took his hand in hers and smiled, eyes widened, he understood her question and pretended a "no guesses" shrug of his shoulders but with enough enthusiasm to egg her on.  She placed his palm on her abdomen and he heard the faint but racing pulse as his own rose to match.  He searched her eyes and she replied with her twinkle eyed smile, cracking a dimple at one cheek.  He fell in love, all over again, as always.

"I did it", she said, almost trembling with passionate enthusiasm, "Artificial Insemination, State sperm Bank, they did not reveal the donor, not even to me, rules, and am only glad.  Called mom and dad and gave them the news.  They cut, not just the call."  He could see her swallowing the bitterness and disappointment gracefully and bring back her charming smile.  He wanted to engulf her in a hug.  "It's ok", she said as his care and worry for her showed in his eyes, "this heartbeat cures more than I imagined it would", she looked at her abdomen fondly.

He did not take his hand off her pulsing abdomen till they parted for the evening.  He dropped her at her door, a cozy little house where she lived alone, refused her offer to go inside with a whispered goodnight kiss on her forehead which she returned with a warm bear hug.

He left after she walked in and waved a good bye from inside the chain locked door.  He reached home, called up the doctors, the sperm bank and his confidente, the friend who pulled the strings.  Thanked them all  for her safety and for keeping his identity a secret, as a tear drop streaked his one cheek.


11 comments:

vrraghy said...

its nice... felt good on readin... especially when he waits for her n then they go to their usual bench...
"They cut, not just the call" - this line was good... :)

mentalie said...

that was so sad and so hopeful at the same time. why doesn't he tell?

Sphinx said...

IS the story gonna continue?

siddharth said...

good work... is it a part of something more elaborate :)..

Sindhu said...

good one uj!!!

Sindhu Sankar said...

I loved that! Love, loss and a way to circumvent it all; Thumbs up Josh!

Acoustic Dreamer said...

I loved it! So concise, yet it says everything.
My plea to you is to continue the story as a part of something bigger!
Great work :)

ujwala said...

@ALL thanks for atooping by and ur encouraging comments more than that. . . I am very glad. . .thnx. Will try to :) :)

ujwala said...

@all shows wen u don write for long, it does... lol, it was *stopping* :)

illiterate said...

Good One.
Keep writing.

Anonymous said...

andha payyanum andha ponnum romba mukkayamanavana theriranga oruttharukku orutthar...aenna avaloda kannu ava sandhoshatta solluradhum avan adhaukku padil solluradhum.....iva velipadaiya magizhradhum,edho oru bayathayum sogathayum muzhunguradhum...avan adha kamichikkama sirikiradhum...avala CUT panna ava family vidhathayum...avan avalukku theriyama avaloda sandhoshatha kaakka ninaikuradhum, UJWALA azhaga solli irukka...kannula padam odudhu, arumaiya....

idha apdiye rasichittu vittranum thonala....konjma perasaya irukku..
Enakku ivangaloda BACKGROUND STORY yum pakkanumnu romba viruppama irukku...mudinja indha " THEIRS " karuvagarathukkana ahzgayum konjam varanji kaattriya...aenna avan romba expect pannittu irukkan avaloda callah,,avalum indha life chaginging viashyattha avankitta solli share pannumnu romba avala irundhu irukka...ivunga rendu perukkulla endha madhiryana uravu..azhagana natpa ? Kadhala ?? sollidriya... :) niraya luve-um pain-um sacrifice-um THEIRS munnadhi irukku...adhayum paakkanum :)