Monday, September 14, 2009

I forbid thee, liar...!

the weekend has come n gone...

but the wind (read gmail) din bring a word from ma love...

she's there all alone all by herself....

and I am here amidst a bustling crowd, all by myself...

waiting for a word, a touch, a sweet kiss...

the parting was hard on both of us...

the world shifted on its plates...

but there was hope as the wind promised a medium...

for our souls to speak to each other...

for our hearts to listen to the beating out loud of each other's names...

for our hands to still feel the lingering hold wen we last walked together...

with that promise we parted... with tht hope we parted...

and now the wind has betrayed us... our souls are dying...

I will never forgive it for this...

but wat do I not understand, it keeps whispering something in my ear as I say this...

No, tht cannot be... No I know my love too well..

No she would not betray me...No I forbid you to talk abt her like tht to me...

No, I forbid thee, a liar to enter my nostrils...

I deny to live on a wind that betrayed me and put the blame on my love...

I love you darling and I am dying with the pride and honour of having loved and been loved by.. U...

Wrote this wen I had to mail a close friend who promised to mail me over the weekend and failed. I chose to keet the context but changed the roles... ;P
Funny, this thing called inspiration... ;P

7 comments:

Deeps said...

Dude,
Who is she? lux?

ujwala said...

@ deeps: ya babey!! was mailing her n ended up sending this. :)

Deeps said...

he he.. has a Homo touch to it.. anyway all your choice babey!!:P

ujwala said...

read the last line "kept the context but changes the roles" meaning I wrote it like a guy is writing to/abt his lover gal whos not with him.... GAWD... Already am single deeps don spoil ma feeble chances even further by statements liek these in a public discussion... ;P lol!!

Murali said...

she must b lucky 2 ve such a love, tat too especially from a girl. :) I remembered a phrase while reading your blog- "Many times in life realization is not worthy bcoz, it comes after v lose something". nd i luv these lines "No, tht cannot be... No I know my love too well.." :)

ujwala said...

@murali: thnx man... :) pls read ma reply to deeps for clarification regarding ur statement "from a gal tat too"... :)

Sudeep Singh said...

I knew, I knew u had dat "Quality". And here it is revealing itself. Ok I meant emotionally poetic by the quality before viewers start drawing conclusions. Sounds touchy touchy n a bit a weird but then dats what I like :)