Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Incomplete - 4

In an innocent rope lying somewhere...
In the glint of a blade in light...
In the p(r)ick of words reminding a needle...
             I taste thee, the temptation to die...

3 comments:

Vikas Jain said...

oh my god...u know sm say an idle mind is devil's workshop, but its not true with u.. I am very sure u would'nt have this much maturty of thoughts if u werent provided sufficient time to think..(Take is a comment for u not being into a real good project)...thanks the employer josh..ur thoughts improved exponentially... this was the master piece.. that needle u talked about and the sharpness of blade was actually hurting me when I gave real thought on it... very beautiful.

Leonhart said...

u couldn say any better here chief.....the picture of the rope lying,the blade in light with the prickin words tempting to die...kinda sad... ;) ...yet made me say "cha,sema"... :)...

ujwala said...

@ vikas: Thnx... :)

@Leon: :) thnx...